We discussed the modified cover pages and the first layout drafts in this class.
Feedback-
Layout: More content, balance between text and images, the 2 on the left page needs to be removed, font style of the title needs to be changed. I was asked to re-work on the layout.Cover: Colour, placing and style of the title needs to be changed. A golden texture could be used in the title.
Reflection: A font style is a simple detail but it makes so much difference to the appearance of any page. I found it a little challenging to choose the right font style for the titles.
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